1. Write the Ordeal as If It Was the Climax of the Story

Paul's Ordeal appears to be at an end. He has the best attorney in town, a feminist, and the psychiatrist is in his attorney's pocket. Surely Kaitrin, his daughter, will be home to stay soon.

2. Kill the Protagonist's Darlings

It turns out that Dr. Kitchen, "Deborah's Boy," and her paid psych, does not react realistically to Kaitrin's love of her dad. The child's illustration on the cover of Burning America show us what she drew. Dad, as primary caregiver, cradling her in his arms while mom stands off to the side. Paul loses, again, and his darlings, Deborah and the psych are of no help.

3. Give Opportunities Within the Ordeal for the Protagonist to be Resurrected

Deborah is about to bail out just when Paul sees light as the custody trial is about to begin. He documented all he could, struggled for over three years, but now Deborah, his attorney is leaving town and abandoning him? Moreover, Paul demurs walking into Court with Deborah's successor, a man! Paul will get railroaded if he walks into Court with a man representing him!

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